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Mar 23, 2010 00:16

Title: The More Loving One.
Pairing: Arthur/Merlin
Prompt: From  kinkme_merlin   ;  Unrequited or unequal love.

"If equal affection cannot be,
Let the more loving one be me."
- The More Loving One, W.H.Auden
Rating: PG-13/M 15+
Word Count: 631
Summary: There are many reasons why he does it, but the one he wishes for he will never have.
Disclaimer: Merlin is owned by ( Read more... )

pairing: arthur/merlin, rating: pg-13, fandom: merlin

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ceredwensirius March 22 2010, 13:56:13 UTC
Oh, ouch, but oh so lovely. I really felt Merlin's conflict here, poor love. I thought you made a great point about Merlin not wanting to get into a tug of war with Gwen. Lovely work.

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emilyia March 24 2010, 05:47:44 UTC
Thank you~ I do enjoy writing Merlin. I can't keep looking at the meme though, school and Career Fest are more important dammit! ;D

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emilyia March 24 2010, 05:49:15 UTC
The poem is just lovely, isn't it? I think I would have been able to keep my mind on my to do list if it hadn't been for the poem in the prompt >_> I'm glad you liked it though, thank you!

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becsx March 22 2010, 14:40:44 UTC
Owww! Paaaain :( I really liked this though!

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emilyia March 24 2010, 05:49:59 UTC
The angst will consume you!

Thanks for reading! ;D

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thisisnidge March 22 2010, 17:08:09 UTC
Oh, oh, oh my god. I should not love unrequited fics as much as I do. This was torturous yet sweet. Love it.

(Captcha says "afternoon bennie". I am now suggesting said "bennie" is something dirty. LOL)

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emilyia March 24 2010, 05:51:33 UTC
There's something about them that gets me, too. I'm glad it worked for you, especially since it's a favourite theme of yours!

[...I'm trying to think of something to do with after training the knights which isn't completely crude, but failing.]

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manhattan_blue March 22 2010, 19:20:50 UTC
I love this because it's basically the opposite of what I would've done if I'd been given the prompt. And because it's gorgeous. ♥

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emilyia March 24 2010, 05:56:22 UTC
I think one of the best things about these two characters is they have almost equal strengths and weaknesses - there's a real sense of balance between them. That's the only way I enjoy relationships really, where there's compromise and even a power struggle rather than an obvious dom/sub dynamic. The range of fic and different interpretations of the characters you can find makes me so happy, and it's the same reason I love my main HP pairing [Remus/Sirius].

...Sorry for that TL;DR. I'm glad you enjoyed it? XD Thank you for the review!

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manhattan_blue March 24 2010, 22:29:27 UTC
I love long replies! And I always find it interesting to find out why people are into their ships. I love Merlin and Arthur together (and Remus and Sirius actually ♥) because I love their contrasts, so we sort of have some similar reasoning.

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