mmmmmmm

[eminga]

right now i am eating bagel chips. i am very happy about eating bagel chips because bagels chips are a luxury in my house. for some reason my dad almost always refuses to buy them but today he found them really chip and bought like 5 different bags. i'm not going to doubt how they make bagel chips so good, i'm just going to eat them happily

Comments

[ldrhcp]

Good stories. Some errors here or there (those vague pronouns in the second story are very confusing) but aside from little editing things they were enjoyable.

You may also want to go through and take out a bit of the fat (not in the third, of course.) Keep up the good work!

[eminga]

...are you making fun of my weight?