Fic: Is the City Quiet Beneath Your Feet?

[emion_lemot]

Title: Is the City Quiet Beneath Your Feet?
Characters/pairings: Ianto, hints of Jack/Ianto
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Set right after the s1 finale.
Disclaimer: All that is Torchwood is property of the BBC and Russell T. Davies. I own nothing, not even the key board I’m typing on.

Summary: “You wished, a long time ago, that the city would solve

Comments

[twistoftate]

I think Ianto being angry at being left makes perfect sense, personally. I really liked this character study. A lot of emotion, and delightful descriptions of his surroundings. Thanks for sharing :)

[emion_lemot]

Thank *you* for commenting! :)

[mv_girl]

Fantastic desriptions and you captured the mood and emotions very well. Just that it was written in second person felt a little strange to me. Any special reason for it?
Thank you!!! :)

[emion_lemot]

I'm a total sucker for writing in second person, but I don't really know why. It might have something to do with that it is personal, but still holds some kind of distance to the character.

Thanks for the comment!

[butterflycell]

that was absolutely gorgeous - I simply adore your style of writing!

[emion_lemot]

A thousand thank you's for the comment. I'm really glad that my style of writing hits some notes! ;)

[samueljames]

I love your descriptions and the flow of your words. Lovely writing.

[emion_lemot]

Thank you so much for your comment!