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emma_daisy

SPN RPS fic: something about hearts and distance.

May 18, 2007 20:08

Title: something about hearts and distance.
Author: emma_daisy
Rating: R
Pairing: Jared/Jensen
Word count: 564
Summary: Jared rolled out bed with a grin and that was enough because this, this thing, this relationship or whatever, it wasn't the kind that needed plans.
Disclaimer: It's all a big silly lie.
A/N: It's a THING. I don't know.

( The skin on Jensen's belly is damp, sweaty against Jared's palm - fingers spread wide and possessive. )

words just words, these boys

Comments 37

iwwfw May 18 2007, 20:42:02 UTC

Oh, this was just beautiful. I loved the spurts of action between the snippets of dialog.

emma_daisy May 19 2007, 07:34:51 UTC

Thank you!

gingerpig May 18 2007, 20:50:57 UTC

Oh baby, that's just gorgeous...

emma_daisy May 19 2007, 07:35:19 UTC

*kisses* Thank you, baby.

imisspadfoot21 May 18 2007, 20:51:24 UTC

Wow! This is amazing! I love it!

Seconds and minutes and hours, muscles aching and sore, fucked out but wanting more

I LOVE this line. It's just perfect, the picture it creates..yeah speechless

Thanks so much!!

emma_daisy May 19 2007, 07:35:36 UTC

Thanks!

sloane_m May 18 2007, 21:51:30 UTC

Dais I loved this. The urgency between the two of them which you convey so well, the humour and the imagery of them fucking each other across the hotel room. Just, yeah. Loved it.

emma_daisy May 19 2007, 07:35:59 UTC

Thanks, sweetheart, you're the best.

speedcat93 May 18 2007, 22:03:32 UTC

Loved it! so simple, no confused feelings, they just enjoy being together, they love each other, but no need for words. Their acts speak for themselves. Thanks for sharing :D

emma_daisy May 19 2007, 07:36:17 UTC

Thanks for reading!