Prokofiev Passion - Chapter 6/?

[emmer23]

AN:  This hasn’t really been proofread.  And I was sipping on some beer fairly constantly (and consuming it fairly quickly) while I wrote this, so sorry if it’s not as coherent as I’d like it to be.

Chapter 6

With a heavy sigh, Arizona pushed open the door to their hotel room.  “Callie?” she called, her voice hesitant and concerned.  Receiving no

Comments

[nerdfightergirl]

This is so good and exactly what I needed at this minute.

I'm so, so curious and I'm trying to be super patient and not beg you for the reveal. It'll be so much sweeter if I wait for it.

[emmer23]

I'm glad it came at the right time!!

I think it will all become clear in the next chapter. Not much longer!

[fronethi]

altough it was short, I liked it. :)
I thought Callie would be a little more upset. will we see the consequences of AZ not showing up?

can't wait to find out why Arizona is not performing with Callie at the beginning. it's been intriguing me since the beginning...

[emmer23]

It was indeed short - sorry about that!

I think this problem will probably come up again. This was definitely a quick fix.

The intrigue was the point. ;) Next chapter is the big reveal!

[bonobo24]

Well that was... weird. Why the hell did Callie forgive her so easily? She stands her up for something ARIZONA set up, let her worry for hours, refused to explain ANYTHING, said NOTHING when Callie brought up proposing, and the next day Callie is fine as long as she promises to explain at some point? That just seemed so ooc. It seemed like a rush to explain away and fix the angst. And everyone knows I hate angst, but sheesh! All that build up and then Callie just accepts that Arizona abandoned her for hours without a word and any explanation whatsoever? Why?

[emmer23]

I don't disagree with you. This issue will probably rear its ugly head again. This isn't the end of the drama.

[oofxx]

I'm so curious to know what the reason is that Arizona wasn't performing in the first chapter. And I have to admit that I'm a bit nervous too.

I'm glad they are okay again (for now..)

Great chapter! :)

[emmer23]

Haha don't be too nervous! It'll all work out in the end. And you'll find out why next chapter. :)

Thanks for the comment!

[oofxx]

When is the next chapter coming? I've been waiting toooo long! ;)

[emmer23]

I'm sorry!!! I'm in the middle of finals right now. I have two more this week. I'm hoping to write the next chapter this weekend.