Crossing Borderlines - 2/?

Jul 26, 2012 19:38


AN:  Thank you for the great reception the first chapter got!  Also, this whole fic will jump around, but please feel free to let me know if this much choppiness is just too damn much.

Chapter 2

September 2002

“Hey, Blondie!” Mark grinned with outstretched arms.  Beer sloshed over the side of his solo cup as he pulled Arizona in for one-sided hug.

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funkyshaz57 August 5 2012, 00:29:29 UTC
Again sorry for the super late review! Enjoyable second chapter. Although you didn't go into detail for their first time, the chemistry and passion from what you gave us was enough to show the instant connection at least physically they first had with each other. I liked Arizona's brazen nature, I found it endearing and TBH really hot!!!!

So the present is happening 10 years later to when they met? So they must be what in their early 30's? It feels as though Callie is clinging on a hell of a lot although I would too..I mean it's Arizona Robbins!!! I guess as the story progresses we'll find out just exactly how strong a bond there was and if they ever fell in love...I'm really intrigued to find out why they never stayed in contact though.

Stink that Arizona didn't turn up, again I'm feeling sorry for Callie but I look forward to finding out why she didn't

Thanks again for another great chapter! I'm really really into this!

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donteatblue September 3 2012, 19:25:05 UTC
So I found this chapter fun and sad all wrapped up into one. Fun because brazen and drunk Callie and Arizona are fun. Sad because she got stood up and now, I've read chapter three and I know why but it still breaks my heart every time. There aren't many writers out there that can make my eyes tear up with so little effort. Excellent excellent writing. Your writing never ceases to impress me and keep me waiting and wanting for more. All the time.

I love no matter what you write and how you write, you leave us with such mixed emotions. I should hate you for that but you're brilliant so you get away with it.

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