Crossing Borderlines - 3/?

[emmer23]

A/N:  Just wanted to let you know that for a variety of reasons (the main being that I will be without internet access for 2 weeks), it will take me a while to get Chapter 4 up, but after that, chapters should be fairly regular again.  Oh, and obviously, I made up these email addresses, but I think it goes without saying that you should not try

Comments

[ladyv85]

Another awesome chapter that was funny and sweet! They seemed pretty into each other ten years ago so I'm anxious to see what happened.
"Yes, I know Paris Hilton.  Yes, she is as vapid and annoying as she appears." This line was hilarious and very true!
Thanks for sharing.

[emmer23]

Thanks! They were definitely into each other, but it's not the end of their story. :)

[knocks_you_down]

Haha Callie knowing Paris is funny. Aww them helping at the shelter was so awesome. And they seem really good together. I love the phone call and the email from Arizona. Can't wait to read the next chapter to see how Callie feels about them.

[emmer23]

Aren't they cute together? :-p

Hopefully the next chapter will be up soon!

[funkyshaz57]

Lovely third chapter. Every present tense part my heart strings get tugged on a little. The first two chapters and the start of this I kind of picked up in the present tense and past that Arizona was holding back some, and of course the mentions of Rachel (uggghh!) don't help the reminder that they aren't together and Arizona may just be actually quite happy without Callie. But when I read the present tense I get a sense of longing if that make's sense? Of anticipation as a reader of what is going to happen, of wanting to know why the hell these two split up! It's a tiny bit sad but freaking interesting

The past tense, I love how you highlight their connection and I could almost see Arizona slowly falling for Callie.

Really amazing work! Cannot wait until you are able to update again! I'm super super enjoying this!

[emmer23]

I know it's kind of cruel of me to include the present angst with all of the past fluffiness, but it'll all be better in the end. :D

I'm really happy you're enjoying this!

[donteatblue]

I kinda just fell in love with your Callie. I know I have two more chapters to review and have two chapters of gushing reviewing prior to this one but I really love your writing and I love this story. I think there might be a handful of writers that I gush over and you're ff is one of them. Okay, I'll stop but seriously, I love it.