Crossing Borderlines - 4/?

Aug 25, 2012 00:00


A/N:  Sorry this chapter took even longer than I thought.  I handwrote some while I was on vacation, but it took me forever to even have a chance to type it up.

Chapter 4

December 2002

“Arizona!” Callie whined as she opened her apartment door.  “Do you really miss me that much?  I know I’m irresistible, but we’ll see each other tomorrow in…” Callie’s ( Read more... )

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nyladreams August 25 2012, 07:15:23 UTC
welcome back! hope you had a nice vacation :)
thanks for the update, another sweet and enticing chapter. the end of every chapter of this story has been leaving me wanting more. (the credit all goes to you)

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emmer23 August 29 2012, 22:05:16 UTC
Thank you! It was a much-needed break.

I hope I won't keep you waiting for more for too long!!

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ladyv85 August 25 2012, 09:07:32 UTC
So glad that you updated! This chapter was awesome. I could literally picture Callie typing that email to Arizona lol. You definitely have their voices down to perfection. I would imagine that Arizona would lash out on Callie if she was around during her brotjer's death. Amazing writing!!
Thanks for posting.

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emmer23 August 29 2012, 22:05:52 UTC
Thank you! That is the best compliment - I'm so glad you think they're in character.

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emmer23 August 29 2012, 22:06:37 UTC
Thank you! Callie's next trip to England will be in the next chapter, so you'll find out soon! :D

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funkyshaz57 August 26 2012, 06:07:30 UTC
Super happy to have an update! So enjoying this! Yikes when Arizona is scared or in pain she can be mighty cold, if it hadn't been her brothers funeral I was kinda hoping Callie would have told Arizona to get stuffed lol. But Callie gets her and knew what she needed and why she was acting the way she did. I love having two parts to this, the past and present, it's such a great way to tell their story then intertwine the two towards the end.

Really great work!

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emmer23 August 29 2012, 22:08:53 UTC
Yes, any other time Arizona's behavior would have been unforgivable, but people grieve in different ways. It's just good that Callie understood her.

Thank you!

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donteatblue September 3 2012, 19:31:11 UTC
Super sadness but you've written Callie brilliantly with great valor. Yes valor. I loved to hate to love this chapter. It's sad but wonderfully written. I actually don't think I could hate anything you've written anyway unless you tortured puppies or something for fun. And it wasn't fiction. And it was my puppy. You get the point. I love how you always make me feel with every chapter of your writing and it's never the same feelings twice.

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