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emmer23

Crossing Borderlines - 5/?

Aug 31, 2012 16:50

Chapter 5

January 2013

They were conscious of the fact that they were just staring at each other in a mix of wonderment and trepidation, but they could not tear their eyes away. It wasn’t until the waitress came to take their drink order that they realized they were in public, that they were sitting in London, having dinner, nearly 10 years after ( Read more... )

Comments 15

nyladreams September 1 2012, 06:43:00 UTC

fabulous!

emmer23 September 10 2012, 02:59:33 UTC

Thank you!

ladyv85 September 1 2012, 09:21:47 UTC

Another awesome update! Love how pieces are coming together and you write them so well.

emmer23 September 10 2012, 02:59:43 UTC

Thanks so much! :)

Chapter Five donteatblue September 3 2012, 19:37:09 UTC

So Callie in this story is so wonderfully written. I really love how past and present she's completely and 100% wrapped up in Arizona and her feelings for Arizona. I know we're slowly progressing toward their break up and as devastating as that will probably feel, it's only adding to the story that I love so so so much. I love your writing. In case you were curious to my feelings on the matter. And you're updates are regular even with a break for vacation. I love it. And I love this story. Thank you for taking the time out of your uber busy schedule to write it.

Re: Chapter Five emmer23 September 10 2012, 03:02:15 UTC

Oh gosh, you are lovely. Thank you for taking the time to review every chapter all at once. They were a delight to read.

My updates are not THAT regular haha. As in...haven't even started the next chapter yet. Oops.

ANYWAY, thank you thank you thank you. Your comments mean so much to me. I've been loving writing Callie for this story. I have to say, though, that in a few chapters, she will definitely stop being so perfect, and I'm nervous about it, because I've grown attached to the Callie in this universe.