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emmer23

Crossing Borderlines - 7/?

Oct 12, 2012 23:26

A/N: I apologize for taking so long to write a low-quality, not proofread, short chapter, but, alas, here is my humble offering.

Chapter 7

February 2013

A silence fell over them while Arizona waited for Callie to say how she felt about the fact that Arizona still clearly kept the necklace on display.

Sighing, Callie stepped forward so that she was ( Read more... )

Comments 16

nerdfightergirl October 13 2012, 03:31:45 UTC

Oh. Wow.

emmer23 October 21 2012, 14:16:57 UTC

:-D

awesomegreys October 13 2012, 04:51:27 UTC

Welcome back, it is always a joy to see your updates alert in my email.
Loved the chapter, short as you said but delicious (low quality?!? Oh no! Low quality with you is impossible dear :) ) we went through their reconnection that has been so sweet and sexy, to some more details about their past forced split, to the introduction of Sofia and you played it greatly, underlining that maybe they were moving too fast without knowing each other or their lifes in the past 10 years in the beginning of the chapter and ending it with a real living evidence of this statement, a daughter Callie had with Mark...surprice surprice!
Truly A.M.A.Z.I.N.G. :)

emmer23 October 21 2012, 14:17:40 UTC

Thank you!! You're too sweet. :) I'm glad you're still enjoying it, despite the developments.

nyladreams October 13 2012, 05:31:17 UTC

talk about a cliffhanger.

emmer23 October 21 2012, 14:17:56 UTC

:D Sometimes I enjoy being just a little bit evil.

knocks_you_down October 13 2012, 06:02:42 UTC

I did NOT see that coming. But that's probably the point right? So the shit is about to hit the fan...again! I can't wait! Mark was just babysitting, that means he's not the father right?! So enjoying this fic! Thank you for sharing!

emmer23 October 21 2012, 14:20:10 UTC

That does mean that, yes! Thank YOU for reading and commenting!

funkyshaz57 October 13 2012, 09:08:28 UTC

Yikes! Mixed feelings on this chapter, still love the story but the addition of Mark and Sofia...Not into that really. AU stories that bring them in brings up all sorts of unpleasant feelings. But for dramatic effect I can see it's use. I'm glad they decided to take a leap...

“Coming home,” Callie answered. “This feels…like coming home.” - my fav line, simple, honest and emotional and kinda made my heart leap!

Sexy Times - Yah!!!! But more please LOL! Too short Lol!

And eek...the past...hmmm I guess the break up is coming ae? And it looks like it is going to coincide with maybe their short lived relationship? How in the world are they going to make this work when I guess technically their situations haven't changed plus maybe even worse that Callie has a child with Mark!!!

emmer23 October 21 2012, 14:21:48 UTC

Just Sofia - no Mark addition, I assure you. :)

I was having trouble writing that scene, because I did want it to feel like more than just sex, and when I finally thought of that line, it all came together. Glad you liked it!

Read that last bit again - she doesn't have a child with Mark. ;) It will all work itself out, I promise!