Orphan Grey (4/?)

Jan 29, 2014 15:37

A/N: Hey, gang!  I know it’s been a loooooong time since I updated.  I would suggest rereading the first 3 chapters (they’re not very long!) if you’re still interested in the story.  There is a small “previously on”, though, if you don’t want to.

Previously on Orphan Grey:  Callie realized her stalker was actually a clone of herself.  She was ( Read more... )

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nerdfightergirl January 30 2014, 00:17:48 UTC
This fic still confuses me, but I am enjoying it.

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emmer23 January 31 2014, 15:48:19 UTC
Does it confuse you because of things I am purposely leaving out, or have I not explained things very well? I'm genuinely curious, because I really want to make this a better fic.

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nerdfightergirl February 2 2014, 07:30:52 UTC
Wow. LJ, you have failed me. I was not made aware of this comment as I was supposed to be, so sorry for my belated response.

I think because of a combination of things you are leaving out on purpose and me not having watched Orphan Black and my general not understanding sci-fi-type things because it's not really my thing most of the time.

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emmer23 February 2 2014, 16:49:22 UTC
Silly LJ.

That makes sense. Sometimes I don't even understand Orphan Black even though I love it...so that probably doesn't help me to explain it in my fic. You kind of don't need to understand it. All you have to understand is that Callie is a clone and that she has identical DNA as the others in this story. The "extra chromosome" thing is something that is on Orphan Black and I don't really understand the science behind it. The other thing that you have to understand is that Dr. Blake (and Ellis Grey) cloned Callie as an experiment and that it is illegal. Because it's an experiment, they are being monitored to see if being a clone affects their life or if they can function as normal humans. So, when Maria reveals that her husband has been performing tests on her and that Laura thinks they all have "monitors", that's why.

I don't know if that helped or not. :-/ I'm going to make an effort going forward to clear things up, because I really don't want the science to detract. At the end of the day, I want it to be a love

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nyladreams January 30 2014, 03:28:38 UTC
Glad to see this updated! This continues to be so interesting and I'm enjoying it.
So is it that easy? Is Ellis her monitor!? (you wouldn't tell me anyway - and that's okay! lol) Still a little skeptical on whether or not Arizona is "in the know" - BUT, I'm not too worried about their feelings for one another as they're totally genuine. :)

Keep up the great work!

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emmer23 January 31 2014, 15:49:55 UTC
Thank you!!

You're right, I won't tell you. :-P I will tell you, though, that you're probably correct in thinking things aren't as easy as they seem right now.

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awesomegreys January 30 2014, 07:56:16 UTC
Love it!! particularly after this story and your suggestion inspired me to watch the "real" Orphan Black that now see me very addicted to it (and the awesome Tatiana Maslany).
It is always a pleasure to see you updating one of your stories!! Thank you

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emmer23 January 31 2014, 15:50:27 UTC
I'm glad this story inspired you to watch it! Isn't it an awesome show?? Tatiana is just incredible.

Thank YOU!!

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awesomegreys February 4 2014, 18:11:24 UTC
Awwwww the show is super awesome you were sooooo right and Tatiana Maslany well, she makes really speechless with her magnificent acting and fantastic hotness. And superb plot!

Your stories are pretty incredible too!! :D Hope we are gonna see soon another update!

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