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[emmett_reiland]

        The shoelace dangled down past the bottom corner of the open locker. The cleats were of an old white leather, with wrinkled ridges along the front where the toe bends. The leather was cracking along the perforated siding. And the black swoosh on the left cleat was coming unstitched along its bottom. The bottoms of the shoes were pale black

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[chef_brockett]

Squeezing the blanket is good. Great descriptions. You describe a scene that reminds me of one of those Country Tyme Lemonade commercials. Or a truncated episode from The Wonder Years.

Robin Yount!