Comments | emmett_reiland: Group Writing on a Typewriter in St. Louis a wednesday night second page

emmett_reiland

Group Writing on a Typewriter in St. Louis a wednesday night second page

Oct 18, 2006 21:47

He slide through the revolving. his shoes squeeked and his hair wet ( Read more... )

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chef_brockett October 26 2006, 23:57:03 UTC

It's interesting to read it as a cohesive whole.

I'm wondering who wrote which - who was the dialogue, and who was the rhyme schemer.

Ha! justinsmith1 November 3 2006, 10:46:49 UTC

The story seemed to deteriorate come page two.

Hmmm... justinsmith1 November 3 2006, 10:50:05 UTC

Oh, Pepe and I had dinner earlier tonight - he said he missed you - up in Madison, while you were in St. Louie. Bad timing, huh? Let me know how things are going. I wanna say my Patch patch hasn't been working - or my Matt patch - but I'm not going to go there. Talk with you soon. - J