Sacrifices - Chapter 1

[emmithar]

Sacrifices

Comments

[jagnikjen]

Good job. I can't wait to find out how it works out.

Great descriptions of Robin's physical pain; and I like how he thought of Much.

Jen

[emmithar]

I wanted it to be Much heavy; I feel that Much is too often forgotten at times. :)

[robinfanatic]

I enjoyed this very much! You manage to get into Robin's head and I like to see him thinking about his friends, in particular Much! It's a different perspective seeing the events unfold through his eyes as he is dying--very nicely done.