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[emmuzka]

Dear Fic writer

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[idahophoenix]

THIS! Just everything you said, yes.

It does sound like you'd be a great beta.

[emmuzka]

Oh no I wouldn't! Being a Finn I always screw up prepositions.. On the other hand, I do have an eye on things that would irk any reader in the long run. (In this case, the author answered to me and told that she *wanted* to write Sauli as naive, so that might be a decision making point for me. I know that he is both hard and very versatile character to write as there isn't much stuff around about him, but my personal Sauli isn't stupid.)

[twindouble]

You would make a perfect beta without the grammar and spelling problems. Let someone else do the other part.

(You make an excellent Alfa as well.)

[anckyria]

You'll want to change "pet peewee" to "pet peeve"...

[emmuzka]

Oh well, no-one is perfect! :D

[ufopoli]

You beat me to that! I'll just add: http://www.delivet.net/peewee.php