poker night

Aug 18, 2004 02:06

*before you read this, notice. it is a very raw colaberation of ideas.it is far from complete, and extremely sloppy ( Read more... )

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holdingyoudown August 18 2004, 08:51:20 UTC
"we all win at this game
i get what i want
and you get what you deserve
answer me this;
do these razors hurt as bad as it looks?
if you dont mind,
allow me to put some salt in these wounds
does it even hurt;
you disappoint me
how can i remove your heart if you never had one
i guess i can improvise"

that's my favorite part out of all of it, you are a wonderful writer & i actually look forward to reading your journal entries. i hope the next one is just as good, if not better. :)

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chuy_caro August 18 2004, 12:17:55 UTC
i would have to agree with you that is one of the best parts...im speechless, i dont know what to say that will even trully sya how much i admire your writing and how amazed i am everytime i read something of yours..it never gets old...its unpredictable..
seriously keep it up...~~rocio~~

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x_crimsonxkiss August 18 2004, 14:22:42 UTC
amen brotherman!! your so fucking great

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_heylushhavefun August 20 2004, 18:44:40 UTC
tsk tsk

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