Softness

Feb 08, 2011 18:57


   For a second time I set out from the Institute. This time even more in turmoil than before. Last time I had been a blank slate, nothing behind me but sterile white walls, nothing in front of me but endless possibilities. This time I had the entire self identity I'd built up fighting with the doctor's one little potent aside -- "what makes you ( Read more... )

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basric February 9 2011, 07:53:30 UTC
I really enjoyed your story. Very well done.

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emo_snl February 14 2011, 02:28:52 UTC
Thanks (:

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myrna_bird February 9 2011, 21:10:48 UTC
Oh good twist at the ending. This guy has been thinking he's a clone right along but now it appears he may be a robot.

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emo_snl February 9 2011, 21:30:12 UTC
Not a clone but.. a drone! ;D

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myrna_bird February 11 2011, 22:22:10 UTC
Ah yes, a drone! I love this story-line.

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emo_snl February 12 2011, 04:51:21 UTC
Thanks (:

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ecosopher February 9 2011, 22:52:54 UTC
I just love how this keeps evolving, and how it keeps addressing our ideas of identity. Great stuff.

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emo_snl February 9 2011, 22:55:21 UTC
Thanks :D that's what I'm aiming for :D

I don't think I've ever written anything before that tried to get this psychological.

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talon February 10 2011, 13:14:41 UTC
mwahahahah. good, goooooood.

Also, Dorothy has a cat? :P

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emo_snl February 10 2011, 15:24:29 UTC
I realize she perhaps should have a little dog but it so happens that I wrote in a little lion here.

(:

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emo_snl February 10 2011, 18:25:57 UTC
Not a clone but a drone! :D

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