Simile and metaphor

Feb 09, 2004 21:43

Why do we dream?
Can a fish?
I've dreamt of fish, maybe they have dreamt of me.
My room smells like metal.

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Turn my head, my room is a forest.
The walls are hemlocks, everything else rocks and shrubbery
The carpet is mud and moss, my bed is stone.
Or perhaps it's just a room.

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storylike February 9 2004, 18:55:52 UTC
thats really beautiful
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