crappy poem from a crappy person
anonymous
August 28 2003, 23:15:19 UTC
I have seen ten roses bleed. I have seen new petals fall. I have felt my soul tear. I have felt nothing at all. I have watched the most vibrant heart fade to black I have seen the most warmest eyes,so quick to attack I have felf shards of glass swimming in my eyes Letting me believe i was forever blind To reach in my wounds and extract all my fears The fear that love is further than near I have seen ten liers love I have seen two lovers lie I have seen the angels of the stary night Wishing i could end their lonesome cries I lie here in a pool of there blood Wishing i could stop this massacre sent out of love. xobrandonxo
alright i wrote this poem when i was listening to afi so if anybody can guess what song and what cd i was listening to then i will give you a BIG COOKIE.......ok well maybe just a little one but hey a cookie is a cookie<3<3 XbrandonX
Re: crappy poem from a crappy personemoloveAugust 31 2003, 15:28:29 UTC
Crappy poem PSHHHH .... cha' right! I'd like to hear/read more of your work. Anyways... I want the crums .. haha so I'm gonna guess.......Hmm. It actually sounded like 2 songs off of the album A Fire Inside and the songs I thought they were are ... "3 1/2" and "Over Exposure" And So my guess is in. *Crosses fingers*
So what was it ??? huh huh??? X-Klairr Bear-X &herats;
Re: crappy poem from a crappy person
anonymous
August 31 2003, 23:15:00 UTC
i tip my hat to you.i am impressed,not one person who i read it to coulda ever guessed it and you are so right. i even forgot that it came from 2 songs i am seriously impressed .i demand to talk to you at school.i want to see just how much you know about AFI. i think you might know more than me.ive only been a fan of afi's for about 4 years but nobody has ever figured out the inspiration behind that poem.but yeah i'll deffinetly let you read some of my other stuff sometime none of them are really that good.and i'll deffinetly get you that cookie sometime.hahaha xobrandonxo
p.s. did you see davey at the mtv awards.im not gay but damn him and jade looked so hot but mostly him.
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I have seen new petals fall.
I have felt my soul tear.
I have felt nothing at all.
I have watched the most vibrant heart fade to black
I have seen the most warmest eyes,so quick to attack
I have felf shards of glass swimming in my eyes
Letting me believe i was forever blind
To reach in my wounds and extract all my fears
The fear that love is further than near
I have seen ten liers love
I have seen two lovers lie
I have seen the angels of the stary night
Wishing i could end their lonesome cries
I lie here in a pool of there blood
Wishing i could stop this massacre sent out of love.
xobrandonxo
alright i wrote this poem when i was listening to afi so if anybody can guess what song and what cd i was listening to then i will give you a BIG COOKIE.......ok well maybe just a little one but hey a cookie is a cookie<3<3
XbrandonX
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Anyways... I want the crums .. haha so I'm gonna guess.......Hmm.
It actually sounded like 2 songs off of the album A Fire Inside and the songs I thought they were are ... "3 1/2" and "Over Exposure"
And So my guess is in. *Crosses fingers*
So what was it ??? huh huh???
X-Klairr Bear-X &herats;
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xobrandonxo
p.s.
did you see davey at the mtv awards.im not gay but damn him and jade looked so hot but mostly him.
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