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Dec 13, 2004 11:42

The unopened room in which the tide has gone out exposing miles of floor never before seen.

The sun's mind
seen scouring the seabed
for unforseen

scars?


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blackmonkeymage December 13 2004, 20:04:38 UTC
I like.

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emophobe77 December 13 2004, 20:29:11 UTC
Thank you!
I am envious of the ease at which you are able to express your in concise essays. I am desparately working against college deadlines right now and unforunantly it is much more natural for me to manipulate disjointed poetic phrases to express myself than anything else. when I read your posts it makes me so jealous of your skill - you're going to be a pro at this! Thanks for friending me.

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shards4shekina December 15 2004, 12:00:23 UTC
"The unopened room in which the tide has gone out exposing miles of floor never before seen."

hauntingly beautiful...so full of air and light, implicit sand, splinters rubbed smooth, relinquishing nostalgia and (reminiscent of virginia woolf, to the lighthouse)

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