Bronx Drabble Collection Part One: "Paint that Kiss"

Jan 25, 2009 20:09

Bronx Drabble Collection
Part One: "Paint that Kiss"

By emorockkid 
PG, Pete/Patrick (hints of Ashlee/Pete), Bronx-centric
Beta'd by letogyllenhaal 
All lies and I didn't mean to offend Ashlee, I'm just a huge Peterick fan.

The sounds from the basement are muffled, but still loud enough that Ashlee's supposed to hear them anyways. Turning her head to the side, she is able to ( Read more... )

pg, drabble, fall out boy, pete/patrick

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ginasfslove January 25 2009, 22:40:04 UTC
aw. goodness. i cant decide on what emotion to settle on after this. sadness for ashlee? total squee for bronx? or happy for trick and pete? i dont know. while i decide, thank you so much for this amazingness

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emorockkid January 25 2009, 22:45:16 UTC
I let away everything that came close to an explanation how bronx got to this so you could set your one little story to this. maybe he was them kissing on the cheeks just as usual or he saw something which ashlee actually soesn't know. It's on you to decide what you'd like to be happening =)

And no way, i have to thank YOU for leaving the first comment on this ♥

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wtfxslutface January 26 2009, 00:57:17 UTC
I agree with ginasfslove. It's hard to pick between sad for the wife or happy for the gay love birds. lol. I loved this. Simple, but explanitory (in a vague kind of way? lol)
Awesome!

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emorockkid January 26 2009, 06:32:03 UTC
I was thinking about explaining it a little bit more before I decided it's ok like this. It's mostly to prove that kids don't think much and that they support everything that's lovely in any kind. It's I wanted Bronx to be like.

And there will also be some more about Bronx and the lovebirds where Ashlee isn't included (I guess lol)

But I am totally happy that I could make you like it that much ♥

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one_stepbehind January 26 2009, 03:15:55 UTC
love!

i have a theory about this. ashlee loves pete so much that she wants him to be truely happy so she gives him the picture perfect life of a beautiful wife and child, while keeping his secret life with patrick, well... a secret.

mems

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emorockkid January 26 2009, 06:34:25 UTC
I so love your theory, totally.
It's what I sometimes like to pretend about their real life as well, although I know that it isn't like that - unfortunately.
But see, you came up with what I wanted to cause: Ending up with your own favourite theory =)

I'm glad that you obviously liked it! %hearts;

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one_stepbehind January 26 2009, 17:11:37 UTC
i know it makes me a bit sad that real life isnt how i want it. but not much i can do about it. :/

so im a creeper and i checked your profile and you are from germany? thats pretty cool. its kind of funny cause my boyfriend is from germany, he moved to the US a little over a year ago, he is from Offenbach. how did you learn english or have you always spoken it? if english isnt your first language then i have to give you even more awesome points for this fic!

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emorockkid January 26 2009, 22:42:07 UTC
I am native german and I learned most of my english from getting into contact with american kids, watching movies in english and just getting into it by USING it actually. School barely didn't do anything positive for it.
But my english got way better since I'm on LJ and reading that much. It helps a lot though =)
Thank you for that compliment, but seriously. i think I have to improve a lot more!

Offenbach is a little bit over 350 miles away from my city which is lying in east germany. your boy might know it, it's called Leipzig, laying south from Berlin.

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fangirl374 January 26 2009, 13:13:57 UTC
my first thought after reading this was: oh shit
next was: what is ash gonna do?
next was: isnt it funny how much little kids see
ur story gets a thumbs up

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emorockkid February 2 2009, 06:01:37 UTC
Sorry for replying that late, I kind of suck in managing to catch up with things sometimes :/
(There's already another Bronx drabble if you'd like to read)

I like that it caused you different reactions and it where exactly those I was wishing I could reach =) Makes me happy, totally ♥

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fangirl374 February 2 2009, 10:50:17 UTC
im happy that i made u happy

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onthewindowpane January 4 2010, 22:40:08 UTC
It's one of those situations were the kid finds the secret out, you know? But what a little sweetheart Bronxy is! I loved how you described his smile, it made you feel it.
<3

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