"The tunic, stitched only at the shoulders, falls open and reveals the smooth planes of the prince’s flanks."
Who wrote this? They make him sound like a horse!
I mean, since when did people have flanks? Do we walk around saying "Oh, his flanks are so hot"? I don't think so.
Also, the author uses "cock" a whole bunch of times which is definitely not a grecian world or even a pseudo english/greek thingie word. That kind a ruined it for me.
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Who wrote this? They make him sound like a horse!
I mean, since when did people have flanks? Do we walk around saying "Oh, his flanks are so hot"? I don't think so.
Also, the author uses "cock" a whole bunch of times which is definitely not a grecian world or even a pseudo english/greek thingie word. That kind a ruined it for me.
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