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autumnwriting January 5 2008, 05:16:40 UTC
Oh, that was gorgeous. Just the right amount of fluffy and sexy to be hot and really, really touchingly sweet at the same time. Well done. ; )

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empathy_apathy January 5 2008, 05:18:30 UTC
Oh, thank goodness! :) It's hard to balance out fluffy slash-I'm glad you enjoyed the result.

Thank you so much for your comment!

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empathy_apathy January 5 2008, 05:40:35 UTC
Thank you for reading, and taking the time to let me know you liked it! :) More on the way.

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decarnin January 6 2008, 14:17:18 UTC
Very nice!

hands wandering clumsily and affectionately across bare skin

And lots of other sweet moments.

Also, nice way of handling Hotch's marital problems via just his end of the phone calls. It isn't how I would have thought he would deal with it, but it's convincing here.

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empathy_apathy January 6 2008, 16:49:39 UTC
I'm glad you thought so. I was trying to figure out how I could tie up the Hotchner divorce subplot, and I figured I'd keep with the theme of phone calls. It worked out pretty well!

Glad you enjoyed the chapter, and thank you so much for your comment! :)

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fireness January 8 2008, 03:16:47 UTC
Wow, sorry I haven't read this yet, but between moving into my apartment and classes starting and work and not being able to connect to the internet for the last three days, I only just saw the new chapter! ^-^

Love Reid getting back into his statistics-quoting self. <3

"Don't make me get the whipped cream," I so totally love you for that image XD

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empathy_apathy January 8 2008, 03:40:17 UTC
XD Oh, Hotch. I'm enjoying this running gag.

Reid's so fun to write. And I finally get to throw him into group conversation in chapter 14! :D

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nikomaria January 12 2008, 16:42:43 UTC
*waves*

I finally found the time to read all 13 ch. and I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed them and that I can't wait to read what will happen next!

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empathy_apathy January 12 2008, 16:51:27 UTC
I am so glad! <3 The next chapter is about 1/3 of the way done, I'm slightly writersblock'd, but I'll be back in the swing of things in no time. :)

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