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Oct 15, 2008 16:27



Not even meaning to write anything, I sat down and spontaneously wrote three drabbles in a row. I wonder what that means? O_O
Drabble table here

if you need to crash, then crash and burn, you're not alone )

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smokexscribbles October 16 2008, 02:46:58 UTC
Somehow I missed this in my morning flist check. It was sad, but I do love the sad, and it was gorgeous as well <3 Good job!

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empress_izzy October 17 2008, 08:33:58 UTC
Thank you <3 Sad is good sometimes. If you're in the mood for it.

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iambickilometer October 17 2008, 19:49:11 UTC
This was the angst (that I did not comment on, whoops.)

See? I'm not as out of it as I thought.

And it was gorgeous, too. X3 I especially loved "morgue".

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Your wayward comment slave returns :D flakedice November 13 2008, 16:02:54 UTC
It means you're obsecenely talented, my dear. Rejoice XD I certainly am. Three! Christmas come early :D

Crash:
Oh my. I've missed this :D You just make my breath catch and my heart squeeze in my chest. You always grab me with the first few words :D His first time on a plane, and of course it should crash. Bad luck, huh. Poor dear.

I love how Watanuki thinks of Himawari and that's what triggers his anger - the harm to her rather than his impending death. And how everything changes with that trembling hand. He looks up into golden eyes heavy with guilt and fear and apologies and suddenly the only feeling left in him is the urge, the need to protect. That's love. Everything gets shunted away in the face of another's need. How you manage to convey this all in only a few words - you have my undying admiration :D As does the way you encapsulate this all in a horrible situation. It makes me forget they're going to crash and then you slide in the knife with a single sentence :D

Morgue:
He doesn’t go because he particularly ( ... )

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anyjen January 26 2009, 20:22:40 UTC
So angsty, so deep, so beautiful... this is going to the memories, yess it is.

I had to re-read "bad day" twice in a row because it was so good, and so Doumeki... I take it he has some sort of mental illness (or a brain tumor?), and I spent a good while going over my scant knowledge of them trying to figure out which one exactly, but to no avail... anyway, his way of dealing with the situation is so very him and the end of the drabble so very beautiful that it made me smile.

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