Over It - Chapter 4

Jul 13, 2012 03:57

Title: Over It - Chapter 4
Rating: PG
Genre: Angst, slight fluff.
Word count: 5.1k
Chaptered: 01. 02. 03.

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Sometimes, two people have to fall apart to realize how much they need to fall back together. )

onkey, fanfic

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emptycavern July 15 2012, 18:28:54 UTC
Heh yes, I finally made them go back to each other!
Well for Jinki, it wasn't so much about the ego than his fear that things will not turn out differently for them. Jinki is the more soft-hearted one in this story heh I made him out like a girl xD

Yeah you never know what you have until it's gone right? Thanks for commenting!
Oh btw, Lucky has been updated. Not sure if you are aware because you haven't claimed your spot there hehe ^^

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kelyh July 13 2012, 12:53:15 UTC
awww finally~~~~~~!!!!!

happy to read they're back together again!! <333 can't wait for the epilogue!

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emptycavern July 15 2012, 18:29:37 UTC
Yep! I'm happy that they are back together too tbh :p
I will try to write it quickly!

Thanks for commenting ^^

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justcallme_lisa July 13 2012, 14:02:32 UTC
OMOOOOOO. finally TT3TT, they're back together..
is this the final part? no please.. heheeee

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emptycavern July 15 2012, 18:30:40 UTC
Hehe nope, I will write a final part, an epilogue. It'll show you briefly how it is like betweem them after some time.

Thank you for your comment! :)

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hikaru_leciel July 15 2012, 04:31:47 UTC
Oh yes. I´m 100% happy! Soooooo happy, you don´t have idea ;------;
This part kept me in suspense all the time!
Starting... the beginning killed me when I realized it was a dream ; -----;
And when Jinki was speaking with Jjong , God! fortunately they did not start dating!
It made me want to go down before I finished reading to make sure Jinki and Key arranged their problems xD
I really liked that Kibum wait for him all the time, and the scene was much more dramatic! Gosh, I just wanted Jinki to stop thinking about what happened before and give Key another chance! *^*
♥ I loved the end really, I adored it!
I am a little sad about Jonghyun, but I want my Onkey together and happy! >:!
Thanks, it was a sad story, but beautiful
I'll be waiting for the epilogue jojojojo~
that xD
I hope you're right! (and rest well xD)
Greetings!

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emptycavern July 15 2012, 18:32:28 UTC
Haha I just love your comment, you're so adorable! ^^
I'm glad you liked the way I wrote it, and don't worry about Jonghyun. I'm sure he's happy to know Jinki is happy :)

Thank you for your awesome comment and your concern! I really love reading your comments, it always makes my day :D

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aussie_rose July 28 2012, 13:42:56 UTC
I had really hoped Key would've pushed the fact he had been making small attempts lately. Maybe to make Jinki realise it wasn't just jealousy that made Key want him again. It is a great story and I am very grateful for the happy ending.

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emptycavern August 4 2012, 16:28:41 UTC
Oh yes, you raised a very good point. I think I wanted to go down that way too, but I got carried away so the pivot kinda shifted :/ It wasn't supposed to be about his jealousy so much :/

Thank you for reading and commenting! :)

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