Comments | emquin: Fic: The Time Machine (16/?)

emquin

Fic: The Time Machine (16/?)

Jan 28, 2013 18:20

Title: e Time Machine
Genre: Romance, Humor, Fantasy
Pairing: Klaine, Brittana, Rory/?
Rating: PG - PG 13
Spoilers: none.
Disclaimer: : I own nothing...and do not claim to.
Summary: In a moment of what could be called absolutely brilliance or stupidity, Rory Hummel-Anderson decided that the only way to get his Papa back was to go back in time and stall ( Read more... )

time travel fic, fanfiction, glee, klaine, pg, the time machine, rory hummel anderson, fic

Comments 4

ravenpan January 29 2013, 04:15:28 UTC

*whimpering* beautifully put together, but it HURTS *cries*

morgan_d January 29 2013, 12:44:37 UTC

Great chapter, dark and dramatic, as it should be, considering the topics involved. I particularly loved Blaine comforting Kurt about Dave's suicide attempt.

Regarding the peanut butter issue... I feel odd defending Will, but he never said there wasn't peanut butter in Ireland, only that Rory had never tasted it -- and that came from the fact that Damian McGinty had never tasted it until Darren and Mark gave him a PB&J sandwich. (Another case of the writers picking stuff up from the actors' lives.) There are lots of popular foods in my country that I've never eaten for one reason or another. Just sayin'.

I do side-eye Will for taking a peanut-based product to school, though. What if any of the glee kids (particularly Rory) had been allergic?

emquin January 30 2013, 03:46:42 UTC

thank you. Glad you enjoyed it. I really wish we had gotten a good Klaine moment in "On My Way", because who better to comfort and feel bad about Dave but Blaine...

About the peanut butter issue. Will never does say that there is no peanut butter in Ireland, you're right. But in this 'verse Rory isn't even from Ireland. He is pretending to be an exchange student from Ireland when really he is an American from the future.

That scene is in Sugar's point of view and so she sees the peanut butter thing as ridiculous because she thinks that Rory has made Will think it's because he's Irish...and she's afraid someone might question it and blow his cover. It's also that she knows for a fact that Rory's had peanut butter. So really it is Sugar's reaction to it that made me write it that way.

Yeah, Will shouldn't have brought peanut butter to school...but then, Will does a lot of things he shouldn't do at that school...

unpublicguy January 31 2013, 16:23:40 UTC

Ohhh sssshhh.... quinn will be alright. I know that :-)