Moss Landing

[emusnare]

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Otters frolic in the estuary
water churns as they tumble about
and snowy egrets, like dabs of sea foam
rest along the shore, their heads tucked under
their wings.

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[emusnare]

Otters frolic in the estuary.
Water churns as they tumble about.
And snowy egrets, like dabs of sea foam,
rest along the shore, their heads tucked under
their wings.

(trying a version with less punctuation)

[kaph]

JEALOUS! What a scene!

[emusnare]

It was pretty cool :)

This year I hope to kayak among humpback whales!