I just wrote this...

[enamoredbysound]

Would you believe me if I told you

Comments

[soviet_made]

I like it, a bit chauvinistic and too matter-of-fact, which to me implies that the narrator is all-knowing and has all the angles figured out. An extremely exagerrated quality/trait. Heh, but that's what fiction is and this is personal preference and creative criticism, which doesn't take away from the skill behind it, so good job. Also, the CD you left was the Gutter Flower, Goo Goo Dolls CD.

TooDooLoo

[jennaperner]

oh my gosh i love it... so very true i think. too bad he doesn't understand that its about him. hahah... oh well hon... love you... see you tomorrow.. be prepared... fun is on the way! Kabbizzle time!

[soviet_made]

I did, I was being kind enough not to give a biased opinion. I'm not THAT thick. ^_^ Bachiatari utsukemono. ^_^