LJ Idol Season 11: Week 5 - "My enemies are all too familiar..."

[encrefloue]

Link to the audio of the song: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1EYqOT8WPX9wE_5Uwd9CwWJ0XAtTomGtN/view?usp=sharingRead more... )

Comments

[static_abyss]

This is beautiful and I absolutely love it, as always. The rhyming is lovely and the tempo is great, and the audio is exactly how I thought this should sound. Just lovely all around.

[encrefloue]

Wow, thank you so much 💙 This one took some toil, so it's very affirming for it to be received so warmly. Thanks as always for reading and listening!

[tonithegreat]

Your wordplay is amazing, amigo! Also your soundscaping. This is so beautiful but so blue. It really makes me think of TMBG again! A similar, but sadder analog to:

You think it's always sensitive and good
You think that I want to be understood
I've got a match
Your embrace and my collapse

Which is a song that I have deeply felt so very many times!

I’m glad you’re doing composing this season!

[encrefloue]

Muchas gracias, amiga!! ♥️♥️ Feels good to be composing. Such an honor to be compared to your music loves. I'll have to check out the song! Did you ever see TMBG's educational podcast? Think it didn't last long, but it was charming!

[nikkiii_brown]

How cool to have an audio edition with this! The rhyming and feeling of the poem comes across so well!

[encrefloue]

Greatly appreciate it! Thanks for reading and listening!

[adoptedwriter]

Beautiful!

[encrefloue]

Thank you!

[sweeny_todd]

I enjoyed a lot about this - the building of the rhyme, but also all the natural imagery.

[encrefloue]

Thank you-so glad that you enjoyed the piece!