LJ Idol Season 11: Week 10 - Open Topic

[encrefloue]

sour cream

Comments

[alexanderscttb]

This is a really touching poem and I also really liked the form, the refrain and each couplet that really drove it.

[static_abyss]

My favorite part of this piem was the middle where you have all these memories in such short stanzas. It was a lovely poem.

[nikkiii_brown]

Stunning!

[halfshellvenus]

This is lovely. So spare but so vivid. We can tell how special he was, and how special your relationship, and that he was very much loved. I'm so sorry he's gone.

[tonithegreat]

This is spare and delightful. Loving but grave. Pablo posted a page of poems he put on the web a few days ago. You guys are inspiring me toward poetry!