LJ Idol Season 11: Week 13 - Fan Death

[encrefloue]

link to the song:https://photos.app.goo.gl/TxaphcnT5XB9r2Ei9

Currently recurring themes:

a current of concurring memes

converging on emerging seams,

conversely adverse to our dreams.

It’s asbestos, as best as we know.

It’s asbestos, asbestos, we know.

It’s as best as, as best as

Comments

[marlawentmad]

I am enamored! I love your take on this prompt, and am thoroughly impressed with your clever rhythm.

[tsuki_no_bara]

the wordplay in this is fantastic, and i love how you used the a/c unit as an instrument. so cool! ...so to speak. :D

[halfshellvenus]

I _loved_ the worplay here, especially the first and fourth stanzas. I hear the words in my head as I read them, so that full effect of shifting sounds is both audio and visual.

Nicely done!

[karmasoup]

I love how you can turn anything into an instrument. I don't think it ever would have occurred to me to use our portable A/C unit this way. XD