LJ Idol Season 11: Week 30 - Portfolio / Lifeboat

[encrefloue]

link to the song.

I'm not

the captain;

I'm a captive

actively practicing

my octaves.

I'm not

the captain;

I'm a hapless

victim of his

and all his actions.

I’m not

the first class;

I serve

the crass fat cats

mostly a list

of Mozart and Lizst.

I'm not

the first class-

cursed to worst class,

first to drown

and last to be found,

lifeless.

O,

sainted patron

of the arts,

Comments

[marlawentmad]

I love the denseness you pack lyrically, while managing to create a catchy and upbeat tune.

[encrefloue]

Thank you! It is a balancing act at times with how wordy I do or don't want something to feel, but I'm so happy you found it to be a successful element and not a detracting one!