AHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA...ahem...HAHAHAHAHAHAHHA...I would call you lame...but I can't
ONLY you and Hannah REALLY REALLY need to work on literary devices. I feel that your novel lacks maturity, and you use vulagrity too frequently...MY advice is to research people who are better than you...like ME...or you could read the color purple... bye-E!
You can't? Jemma, I made DOLLZ, you can, trust me, you can!
Thank you for your critique. When we win the nobel prize and cure cancer with the Recruiter, we'll thank you for helping to get us on the right track.
I've been highlighting in my copy of the color purple. Research goes well. Next, I'll have anal sex to see how it feels. First hand research is always best, I say.
Ahhhh, when will you guys be done. I only got to read chapters 1 and 2 on friday, you know, in between the literary criticism you were getting. I thought you guys had a very well developed plot for the recruiter being a......well, what it is.
Fujiya and Hojo make me laugh. I can just imagine the two of them being roomates. Hojo makes me laugh because he kind of looks like an engineering major, and he is wearing socks and sandals (nice touch). Fujiya because he is so cute and wearing an anarchist t-shirt which makes me think of the rally, and then the alley.....
P.S.: I'm sad that I live in mason and my mom goes nuts in bad weather.
Glad someone enjoyed it! But I loved the criticism! It was like, um...hellooooo, porn novel! Porn novel! Not the color purple! But alas...
Haha! I never stopped to think what Hojo would major in! Engineering is a lovely idea! Not that it really matters what Hojo majors in, but it's funny ^_^ Fujiya is SO HARD CORE! OOOOOH YEAH!!!
With any luck yes. Actually I'm not really doing anything next week. I have no idea when we are leaving for my grandparent's, but that will probably be for like two days and over the weekend.
I wonder what their majors would be, or had been in Kanou's case. Not that it matters to the plot or anything. Smut doesn't really require life backgrounds. I bet Kanou was a physical education major...... Fujiya IS hard core........ just like Hyde.
Hahaha... sorry, I just downloaded the Flower PV and am watching it right now. It is making me laugh with joy, hyde is too adorable. tight leather pants, cage, harmonica.
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And, yes, do tell! Hojo hotels?! WHERE?!
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The Howard Johnson Hotel Compnay thought it would be all groovy if they just started abbreviating their hotels as HOJO!
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ONLY you and Hannah REALLY REALLY need to work on literary devices. I feel that your novel lacks maturity, and you use vulagrity too frequently...MY advice is to research people who are better than you...like ME...or you could read the color purple... bye-E!
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Thank you for your critique. When we win the nobel prize and cure cancer with the Recruiter, we'll thank you for helping to get us on the right track.
I've been highlighting in my copy of the color purple. Research goes well. Next, I'll have anal sex to see how it feels. First hand research is always best, I say.
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Fujiya and Hojo make me laugh. I can just imagine the two of them being roomates. Hojo makes me laugh because he kind of looks like an engineering major, and he is wearing socks and sandals (nice touch). Fujiya because he is so cute and wearing an anarchist t-shirt which makes me think of the rally, and then the alley.....
P.S.: I'm sad that I live in mason and my mom goes nuts in bad weather.
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Haha! I never stopped to think what Hojo would major in! Engineering is a lovely idea! Not that it really matters what Hojo majors in, but it's funny ^_^ Fujiya is SO HARD CORE! OOOOOH YEAH!!!
P.S. Will I ever see you over break?!
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I wonder what their majors would be, or had been in Kanou's case. Not that it matters to the plot or anything. Smut doesn't really require life backgrounds. I bet Kanou was a physical education major......
Fujiya IS hard core........ just like Hyde.
Hahaha... sorry, I just downloaded the Flower PV and am watching it right now. It is making me laugh with joy, hyde is too adorable. tight leather pants, cage, harmonica.
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