Comments | endless_run: 30 days catch-up

endless_run

30 days catch-up

Dec 21, 2009 18:20

12/16
day 10 → a photo of you taken over ten years ago

Um, yeah, gonna have to skip this one, lol. I don't have any photos of me from 10 years ago, they're all in my mom's photo album... Which is in her house, lol. So yeah... NEXT!

12/17
( day 11 → a photo of you taken recently )

books, meme, 30 days, wicca, pics, nostalgia critic, persistence of memory, ranting, twilight, amelia atwater-rhodes

Comments 4

fastforwardlife December 22 2009, 09:03:25 UTC

SO MANY WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORDSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS. x|

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kinda totally agree with your summation with PoM. if i recall, she said she wrote it for NaNoWriMo, and it... sounds like it. like it was written quickly without much final editing. :/ i liked her return to vamps, as that's typically been my favourite subgenre, but i would've loved to see it more fleshed out.

endless_run December 23 2009, 04:07:58 UTC

xD i cant help it I'm long windeeeeed

Yeah it...blegh. PoM kind of shocked me with how bad some of her writing is x3 I liked her vampires too, but there was nothing new, and the characters just couldn't carry it, lol. But yeah, a little time put into things never hurt anyone.

Maybe Token of Darkness will be better? Although the ghost angle makes me kind of skeptical...

fastforwardlife December 24 2009, 08:46:15 UTC

lol, it's cool. i was just teasing.

yeah. i dunno if it's because she kind of switched styles with the Kiesha'ra series, and we all forgot how what we read as thirteen year olds was that bad, or what, but it definitely could have been better. and i think more revision would have helped. especially the end seems rough, the pacing was just off.

lol, i'm guessing that's gonna be her next book? i haven't even been paying attention, i really only heard of PoM when megan started talking about it. i'll have to check it out sometime...

endless_run December 26 2009, 07:21:54 UTC

I dun think so, the Kiesha'ra seemed rushed, too, like there was a lot more to them but they got cut down to be about the same size as her others. God forbid anyone but Stephanie Meyers write a book about vampires thats more than 150ish pages u.u Or maybe that's just how she writes? I dunno, i bet there are a bunch of deleted scenes out there somewhere, lol.

lol by the end I was just skimming. I couldn't really follow wtf was going on with Pandora and Adjira and Sassy and all that shit. I was just like "whatever, how does it end?" x3 for some reason I found that all really cofusing.

and yep, that's next in line. ghosts~ wooooOOOOoooo. Sounds suspiciously like Dark Angel by LJ Smith...