I decided to write these as a part of Slash the Drabble community prompts, Seven Deadly Sins. Each prompt is one sin, but I thought it would be interesting to create a little story out of all of them, with one drabble for each. Let me know if you think it worked out or not! =)
Title: Never a Sin
Fandom: Glee
Pairing: Rachel/Quinn
Words: 100 each
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LOVE that part. So Rachel. And this story is really great. I like the use of the prompts and how it all flows together. :D
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My only criticism is the sudden change in attitude towards Rachel. Of course with the 100 word limit and 700 word in all limit you can't exactly have an intricate character development.
A+ :)
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As for the change of attitude, believe me, it bothers me too, lol! I'm all for carefully laid character development and build ups, but it's exactly like you said, there's only so much you can do with such a strict limit. I hate saying things like: "Quinn decided to not push Rachel away anymore" instead of showing why and how she decided that. But when it comes to drabbles, you have to pick your battles! :P Again, thank you for commenting! =)
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