Comments | enemeriad: lets burn the boats back to who we used to be

enemeriad

lets burn the boats back to who we used to be

Nov 27, 2013 00:58

Title: help me taste the bite of death
Fandom: the hunger games
Characters: johanna mason, finnick odair
Warnings: canon compliant, mature (tw: abuse, alcohol, drugs etc.)
Summary: love, johanna remembered her sister telling her, was weird.
written pre-catching fire for silverponies because who else would introduce me to these two.

( all this time it was never what it seemed )

character: finnick odair, fan fiction: the hunger games, character: katniss everdeen, fanfiction, pairing: finnick/johanna, fandom: the hunger games, character: johanna mason

Comments 1

silverponies November 26 2013, 15:12:33 UTC

ok first of all I LOVE YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THEM FOR ME. my icon is me when I saw this/rn/forever

you seriously got their characters so PERFECT. johanna being snarky and closed-off and pushing the people she loves the most. see:

'Say my name,' he whispered to the bones at her navel. 'God, say my name when you come and say it like you love me.' / But Johanna Mason knew only one god and it was no man. / 'Annie Cresta,' she'd breathed out in climax and then cried when he left.

and finnick so fucked up and torn and never really knowing what to do so just doing whatever he's told (it's what he's good at/it's what he knows).

also, subtle shit like this:

If she'd had a drink, in that moment, feeling his eyes claw over her lime catsuit, it would've found itself in his stupidly glistening hair. // 'Go to hell, Finnick.' / Conveniently, this time she is armed. continuity girl, you got it ( ... )