fanfiction | harry potter : A smile can brighten up someone's day

[enen_chan]

title: A smile can brighten up someone's day
genre: friendship ;; romance ;; fluff(maybe)
pairing(s): scorpius x rose
word count: 2285
rating: pg
notes: this is the first fanfic i've written and finished in about two years, so it's a bit rough and rusty, but yeah, here's goes :)

Comments

[my_thestral]

This was lovely! :)
I loved how his thought process always ends up in this or the other action that pulls them together and how she notices and never really talks about it either, just makes sure she does all the right things that will make him appreciate her more. He's a bit introvert (if not a bit oblivious) and she's just as emphatic as her mother and even a tad more tactful. This girl's got it under control. ;)
And I definitely loved how you made her a proper Weasley, not only a mini-Hermione - the height and the eating and some sort of bluntness are all Ron's traits - and just for the record, he's my favourite. :)
You definitely should stick to writing now that you're on the roll!

[enen_chan]

Oh my god, thank you so much for your lovely comment! :D

I don't know if Scorp is so much oblivious, as more just that, he knows these things (most of them anyway), but it doesn't really take on much of a significance until these moments, I guess. I do like to think he would be a bit of an introvert. In my headcanon, Asteria's a Ravenclaw, possibly a Slytherin, but one who's definitely more 'keep your head down, don't be noticed' to get what she wants type, rather than outwardly show the world what she's up to - but that's just my thoughts. And, especially in the sixth and seventh books, we do see Draco a bit more introverted than the pretentious brat he is in the previous books