a haunted man (silas, atticus shane fic)

Nov 24, 2012 23:24


title: a haunted man
summary: this is silas' story, or perhaps it's not his story at all.
characters/ships: atticus shane/silas, bonnie bennett, ketsia, general; silas/ketsia, silas/ketsia/unnamed woman, atticus/bonnie
rating: g to m, real m because who am i?
warnings: potential dubious sex given age differences but nothing illegal.
notes: this is ( Read more... )

rating: g, character: ketsia, doomed ships, character: bonnie bennett, fandom: the vampire diaries, fic type: one-shot, genre: drama, rating: m, character: atticus shane, tv: the vampire diaries, character: silas, genre: smut, writing: how the hell do you do it?

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ladygawain November 25 2012, 08:46:00 UTC
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Thank you!!!! No truly, you don't understand how much your help made this thing possible. I'm still really obsessed over the changes you advised me to make in part 10 because they actually MAKE it come together, so thank YOU.

I want to sit here and chinhands over the wrong of it all.

Come to my bar, where I wallow in all the dirty!wrong this show can give me.

I just want Silas to be as fucked up and damaged as he should be, and I really don't want the show to mess it up - but I am not holding my breath as I like being alive too much, sigh.

This is not the best comment, but I gladly accept this birthday/Christmas gift.

HUSH, this is the best comment. Thank you for your wondrous mind. And for accepting this gift ;)!

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ever_neutral November 25 2012, 02:16:43 UTC
Ooh, this is stunning. I love your Silas so much, and would that the show's version of Bonnie/Shane be this fabulous. Satan bless you for writing this.

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ladygawain November 25 2012, 08:48:14 UTC
Thank you, I am glad you liked it and him. We can only dream - there's so much they can do with this story but... it's also the same show that mangled Stefan Salvatore to the point of... well whatever he is now, so.

The best of blessings!

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angryzen November 25 2012, 08:36:48 UTC
I don't think you understand how good this story is. I'm just...no words. Because I've already capslocked this story to death on Skype, but something about this being the final version + the fanmix makes it feel like I'm reading it for the first time.

Seeing as it would be inappropriate for me to highlight all of part 10 (me and part 10 have a love/hurt relationship):

Perhaps this hadn’t been his story all along. With the inevitable end, came the stark realisation that it wasn’t about him, that thousands of years didn’t add up to anything more than being the transient figure, the villain, the lover, the serpent, the blip in someone else’s chronicle-in hers ( ... )

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ladygawain November 25 2012, 08:54:00 UTC
Ahhhhhhhhhh - your words, like a really good stab wound to the heart, thank you!!!

I should just give that part a special dedication, because there's nothing that delights me more than unbridled pain and creepiness, which I feel like I made a special effort to bring both, trololol!

How? Why? What are words and how do you do them? What is ripping my heart out and stomping on it?!

As you well know, I eat hearts for breakfast and am a part-time manticore. So this response is exactly what I wished for!!

This fic is amazing. Just amazing. And kudos to your beta. And your magnificent brain.

Merci! She is awesome, as you well know.

The show won't do this. They're trapped between a rock and a hard place. They either don't do this, or they do this and ruin it and make what Bonnie and Silas feel for each other completely tertiary to two stupid things: her "friends" and something to do with the Salvatores.

I'm preemptively crying about it.

This is a terriblemazing Christmas/birthday gift. Now I just need to produce the uber late ( ... )

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magisterequitum November 25 2012, 19:07:58 UTC
LIKE HOLY FUCKING SHIT.

Let me collect my thoughts and try and to give this and you the most amazing reply to this stunning fic. BECAUSE IT IS SO STUNNING.

She left him kneeling in the sand beside another woman's charred remains, with the taste of her blood in his mouth.

like the way you set this up and their creation is enough to leave goosebumps on my arms. it's so vicious and wonderful.

“She’s-” everything... “She looks a lot like you, it’s amazing,” he had said as easily as he could manage, putting the frame on the desk reluctantly and stepping away from it.

mhmmmm. i see you, dude. i see you.

ALSO OBLIGATORY: SHEILAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA; never over it.

The stifling weight of her magick bearing down on him as she said in an acid whisper, “I’m just doing everything you taught me-do you remember?”

And then she would smile. And her mouth, tart lemons and wet cinders, would bite down on his, “I’m not afraid anymore, not even of you.”be still my heart. like everything i love and want about Bonnie. How fierce and terrifying and ( ... )

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ladygawain November 25 2012, 19:41:03 UTC
Omg but this comment.


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magisterequitum November 25 2012, 20:43:29 UTC
♥ ♥ ♥

YOU GIVE ME TOO MUCH CREDIT.

But ohhhhh, I really did love this. AND I FORGOT TO TELL YOU HOW I LOVE THE STYLE YOU PUT IT IN. LIKE A+ CHOICE AND SO EFFECTIVE.

I'm gonna reject whatever the show does and choose to believe this instead because this is perfect.

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pocochina December 1 2012, 02:28:41 UTC
ooooh, this worked. I love his POV on Bonnie.

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ladygawain December 13 2012, 08:50:02 UTC
thank you!!!

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