Rain (One Shot)

Jun 17, 2012 22:19

Title: Rain
Author: engel_sehnsucht
Pairing: Belldom
Rating: PG/PG-13
Summary: A rainbow was stretched across the dark sky, its pastel colours the only brightness in the city.
Feedback: loved.
Warnings: none.
Disclaimer: I don't own Matt or Dom, and all of this is, sadly, fiction.

AN: This is my entry for the June '12 fic challenge. Hope this is okay, and that you can ( Read more... )

[band] muse, [type] fluff, [length] one shot, [era] the resistance, [type] established relationship, [pairing] belldom, [title] rain, [rating] pg/pg-13, [writing] fic challenge

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hyper_bliss June 18 2012, 19:03:23 UTC
aaaaaaaaawwww this is beautiful , so sweeet awww the rain, Matt's words, Matt's actions, .. Dom shivering because of the cold awww.. and then the kiss!! <3

loved the descriptions at the beginning

wonderful, my dear, as always <3

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engel_sehnsucht June 23 2012, 20:18:58 UTC
Awww, thank you, lovely! ♥

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marianthezeta June 19 2012, 00:28:09 UTC
Ahhh this was so sweet. I love the mood you created and the kiss at the end. <333

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engel_sehnsucht June 23 2012, 20:19:15 UTC
Thank you. ♥

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thekeyholder June 19 2012, 12:53:36 UTC
It's been a while since I read any kind of fiction, especially Belldom, so I'm really glad I decided to have a break and read your newest one-off. :) I'd like to write something for this fic challenge too, but I'm not sure I can...

Anyway, I really liked this story! Your descriptions are amazing and I like the chromatic images, especially the end with droplets and rainbws. <3 Another favourite part was this:
The skin of his cheekbones seemed to almost reflect the light cast upon them, his cheeks dark and the hollows of his eye sockets hidden in almost complete blackness.

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engel_sehnsucht June 23 2012, 20:19:38 UTC
Aww, thank you so much, Brigi! I think you should do. ♥

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liamuse June 19 2012, 20:34:26 UTC
Oh my Darwin. They spread rainbow everywhere they go. =D
Beautiful. <3

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engel_sehnsucht June 23 2012, 20:19:53 UTC
They do haha! Thank you. ♥

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hannah_chapter June 21 2012, 14:41:43 UTC
Oh, just gorgeous!

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engel_sehnsucht June 23 2012, 20:20:05 UTC
Thank you!

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