A Thousand Kisses Deep Chapter 8

[englishblue]

So, surprise! Not entirely forgotten after all. Here's the next chapter of A Thousand Kisses Deep. A few more to go and I should be able to wind it up. Sex is very difficult for me to write. Sex gives me the fits. I've been wrestling with this all afternoon and finally threw up my hands in surrender.

Comments

[zubeneschamali]

Sex is hard. (Heh heh. Heh heh.)

*ahem* I'm so happy to see another chapter of this. It might have been difficult to write, but the end result was worth it. Manhandling!Jared is always hot, and the last image is fantastic, for Jared's laugh as much as the naked happy dance.

“You’re never going to lose me. As long as I know I’m what’s best for you,”

Hmm. Ominous much?

[ymmy12]

so happy to see this up
hot!

and oh no, what if jared thinks jensen doesn't need him???

[englishblue]

If Jared thought Jensen would be better without him? Let's try not to think about that.

Thank you for the sweet fb.

[englishblue]

I could see that naked dance so clearly in my head, but, you know, sometimes fewer words are more. :D

And please stop sneaking into my head. I wouldn't exactly call it ominous. Well. Maybe.

I owe you some fb. I'm kind of swamped right now, but I'll get to it. Promise.

ETA: This comment is for zuben. I don't know how it got out of whack, but my LJ does that sometimes and I want to kick it!

[cruz_delsur]

Don´t fret, it was perfect! great update, it´s cool to get back to this story. Thanks for sharing!!

[englishblue]

I hate being such a slow writer, but you make me feel much better. Thank you, babe!

[your_byron]

Haaaa update! And with hot sex too! This is my favourite historical J2 AU at the moment! I love it.

[englishblue]

You have the patience of...a really patient person. Thank you so much. There will be more coming. I really appreciate your sweet comment.

[your_byron]

Hehe...patient? Well, i have two really wild boys, 9 and 4 years old, patience is my middle name.

[englishblue]

I remember those days. I had two girls and a boy. You're an absolute saint. :)

[candygramme]

*fanning self*

Please practice writing sex a little more, because I think that with a little effort you could make my brain explode.

I love this chapter. What I really loved was:

Jensen writhes beneath the wet tongue lapping at his throat, shudders building in his belly. A crawl of heat spills through the tightness of his balls. The touch of Jared’s palm on the faint trail of hair growing below Jensen’s navel focuses him on the overwhelming sensation of being petted with cherished absorption.

I mean, OMG PHEW! I'm a puddle.

[englishblue]

I think I was channeling the real Jared there. Who wouldn't want to pet the man from his toes to the hair on the top of his head.

I'm so glad you liked the chapter. Trying to come up with new ways to describe sex makes me slightly crazy.

*smooch*

[candygramme]

There are only so many ways of writing 'insert tab A into slot B; repeat.' You haven't been limited by that concept, and I am truly happy about that.

[englishblue]

Thank you. I try. :D Again and again!

[nightporters]

Please please please tell me you're not going to do anything silly - like break them apart? Please.

*worries*

[englishblue]

Mmmmm. Would I do that? I hope not. :D