Deep Void, TabiRi; Angst

Apr 10, 2009 13:14

 


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tenshibattosai April 10 2009, 07:46:00 UTC
I love the description in this! :)

I'd say short and sweet, but probably more bittersweet? It made me awee, but it was sad ~

I'd quote you, but I think I'd end up quoting the entire drabble, haha XD The entire thing flowed so well~

Good job!

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engraved_16 April 10 2009, 08:27:14 UTC
awwwww thanks much ^^

awe quote me >.

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orenjimaru April 10 2009, 10:52:01 UTC
T^T

xxx

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engraved_16 April 10 2009, 23:00:57 UTC
Unnie~

i need more specifics LMAO other than T^T hehe
at the top as oyu can see it was re-written from my HoMin one i did lol

p.s seen winds preview with G-D??

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orenjimaru April 11 2009, 15:10:57 UTC
Sorry I was incoherent, it just made me sad. Thanks for making my night depressing LOL.
Quite beautifully done though, rather different from your previous ones, I like how it sounded really distant but still conveys emotions well :)

YES I DID. I thought it was proper good! w-inds. has changed their style slightly again, though probably to match with GD or something. It turned out really good, well up to the hype, I was so pleased with it. How did you find it?
xxx

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engraved_16 April 12 2009, 00:35:23 UTC
*pouts* LOL, yes very different i was going a bit metaphorical...i think its just becoz i was high during that time xDDDDD

Im not to sure about w-inds so i dont really know about their style but yeah i did feel like there style was suiting more of G-D's ^^ hehe

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vangelynn April 11 2009, 03:22:36 UTC
*jabbers* Omo! This was a HoMin fic too =D Gosh, I love love love love love! The last line was so perfect!! *_*

Yay! You got a new layout too :D

~ thanks for writing

Maru-unni, I like your comment XD

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engraved_16 April 11 2009, 06:37:31 UTC
LOL...well since this drabble has no clarifictions on a pair originally i just felt like it was a HoMin but decided to make it a TabiRi too ^^, hehe thanks ^^~you get what it means right?? and i luv the ending too

hahahha yes, i need a more darker LJ

hahah >.> orenjimaru unnie is in some kind of state right now lol

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brilliessence April 11 2009, 23:37:47 UTC
ooh sorry. i deleted the other comment because it got screwed up :/

okay:

alkj;dlkdajslkaj df -dies-

sad ;_____; like. eat my heart sad.

and your comment "i reveal my age alot too becoz people get amazed about the maturity of my writing"

its a nice feeling, right? to know that if people think you write beautifully now, then in the future you'll write amazingly well :DD thats what im hoping for <3

well, anyways, really good puzzle!to-ri fic xD
did you read my stuff? i think i remember you. a comment, maybe?
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engraved_16 April 12 2009, 00:41:27 UTC
asdfghjkl; *dies with your keyboard smash*
*pouts* here *gives you a new heart* keke

hehe thanks i soooo thought you were older than me TT^TT i feel old now TT_TT xDD ahahaha. yeah it feels nice ^^ when people compliment on your writing and they hear your age and they flip ^o^, and Yea i hope my writing improves

lmao originally the pairing i had in mind was HoMin and i still feel like HoMin fits but i decided to make it tabiRi too since there was no actual specifics on whos who ^-^, yesh i think i wrote on your You,You,You fic and bashed that girl who was plagirising XDDD *feels guilty, but i got her to delete it* LMBO

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