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Don't You Dare Believe It (1/9)

Dec 19, 2010 17:12

Title: Don't You Dare Believe It
Author: enimsaj_2
Pairing: Frank/Gerard
Rating: PG13
Warning: Language
Disclaimer: I only wish I owned them...
Summary: Frank hates school. Will Gerard's arrival at Frank and Mikey's school make things better? or... worse ( Read more... )

frank/gerard, frerard

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Because I am a nerd PART ONE thefinished January 11 2011, 01:30:42 UTC

This is getting good...anticipation!

And since you have no beta, I will be yours!

"Great... No place is safe now. There is no way I'll be able to graduate on time... Not with him here. After what he did I don't think I can even be near him... Well... maybe I'm overreacting. Maybe... Maybe he doesn't remember what happened that night. I mean, he was really drunk. Possibly stoned as well. But that still doesn't erase the fact that he -"

When somebody is thinking something, the " aren't necessary.

But other than that, it's awesome. I know I just started but the dialogue is SO NORMAL! Thank you for that!

Re: Because I am a nerd PART ONE enimsaj_2 January 11 2011, 01:50:05 UTC

lol well thank you for the kind offer but i actually have a beta now, i just didn't when i started writing this. ^.^

Re: Because I am a nerd PART ONE thefinished January 11 2011, 02:43:42 UTC

Damn. You already have a beta? *heartbreaks* Darn. Know how will I help people by being all nerdified??? :'O

Re: Because I am a nerd PART ONE enimsaj_2 January 11 2011, 03:06:06 UTC

well... you can still help, i mean, even with me having my beta you still managed to find a few mistakes on mine, and i know there are tons of authors out there in (desperate) need of a beta, so... just surf around. You'd make a good beta ^.^ if i didn't already have one, I'd go all Pokemon on you and be like "thefinished, i choose you!"
don't be saaad :(

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