FANFIC; irregular time (amy/eleven.)

[enparis]

title: irregular time.
rating & warnings: pg. & none.
characters: amy pond & the eleventh doctor.
pairing: amy/eleven.
summary: he's real. he's Amelia. he's the raggedy doctor. and she's grown up and moved on. - the doctor's leaving as seen through amy's eyes.

Comments

[extremelyclever]

Ahhh! I love how this is all about Amy's thoughts and stuff around the time of The Eleventh Hour. I am anxious to see where you will go with this! I've only read a few DW fics and they were all Amy/Eleven, but not anywhere near as developed as this seems.
Good writing! I like the lists and the rambling strewn across the paragraphs; lists are my favorite :) Keep going, you got this.

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[extremelyclever]

I realized that you probably weren't planning on continuing this story. I think it sounds like a prequel or something, so you should definitely think about continuing with this train of thought :)

[enparis]

fff, thank you SO MUCH. you have no idea how much i flailed at this :3

i LOVE rambling and lists, especially when it comes to writing about feelings and thoughts, mainly because my thoughts are all quick and listed together which is how i usually structure things when writing about how a person is feelings, it feels like it flows more. to me, anyway.

and thank you for saying i should continue it! iii am not sure if i will, but this was part of a fic i had already written that i rewrote this morning and i've got another that i sort of wrote a bit of and left which i might pick up on another time. it's not totally related to this but it involves talk of amy growing up (i'm forever doomed to write about her issues ;_;) and there's more doctor/amy shippyness.

but ah, ignore my rambling THANK YOU VERY MUCH for the lovely review <333

[a_phoenixdragon]

Thank you...yesyesyes - and thank you!! This...this was what I was waiting for!!

*Sobs with happiness!*

*Saves*

[enparis]

ahh, i'm so glad you liked it! :3 it's the first fanfic i've managed to finish in... years, so i was a little hesitant with posting. but thank you for the lovely comment! <3

[obscure_musical]

Wonderful fic! Very true to Amy, and wonderful prose. Very stream of conciousness. I love it!

Fabulous little time jump in the middle, I nearly missed it, but that somehow feels like the point. If that makes sense.

Thanks for writing and posting! -hugs-

[enparis]

thank you so much for this comment! :3 writing stream of consciousness is probably one of my favourite things ever because i love getting my way inside character's heads.

but thank you <333

[tasty_kate]

Oh, this was just lovely! Great job!

[enparis]

eee, thanks very much! <3

[enparis]

thank you so much! <3