I'm sorry I acted the way I did... I don't really have a good excuse. Oh, I am certain these could be better, but I tried to do my best.
I even wrote the twenty five different letters to different people, including everyone on the mission. I figured it would be better than just copying the same letter twenty five times, more meaningful as well.
As for the paper... I did my best but I am not sure I really know what I'm talking about. I did some research, or tried to. Here it is.
(The Letters are highly detailed and pretty well written considering who its coming from. Though there is still something awkward about it, they seem authentic. The paper on the other hand is somewhat stiff and its clear that Kira doesn't really understand what he is saying, even if its technically correct, just as he said.)
No, I haven't. I was born and raised in the colonies and it really isn't practical to make areas to camp when the space is needed for other things. And if there was, I probably wouldn't have been able to convince my father to let me go.
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I'm sorry I acted the way I did... I don't really have a good excuse. Oh, I am certain these could be better, but I tried to do my best.
I even wrote the twenty five different letters to different people, including everyone on the mission. I figured it would be better than just copying the same letter twenty five times, more meaningful as well.
As for the paper... I did my best but I am not sure I really know what I'm talking about. I did some research, or tried to. Here it is.
(The Letters are highly detailed and pretty well written considering who its coming from. Though there is still something awkward about it, they seem authentic. The paper on the other hand is somewhat stiff and its clear that Kira doesn't really understand what he is saying, even if its technically correct, just as he said.)
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I'm glad to see you've put so much thought into it. ... and sorry to be so hard on you. I'll be sure to read it ASAP.
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...Do I still have to clean toilets?
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