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qzee September 13 2008, 18:35:18 UTC
yay! I'm glad Trip finally clued in and glad Malcolm is taking a chance on him. This was sweet and fun. I love the survival kit Mal comes up with and think it should become standard. I love the survival trial/camping thing and the way they both stumble through misunderstandings toward the beginning of a relationship they both hope is for keeps.

Thank you for writing this, I love it.

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qzee September 14 2008, 10:08:25 UTC
I'm very glad you liked it! It did take Trip forever to clue in, partly because I enjoyed writing the camping trip so much^^. And I think Malcolm would be ecstatic if Starfleet installed his survival kit as standard.

Thanks for commenting!

Sita

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luckycricket_1 September 13 2008, 21:37:16 UTC
About darn time that Trip caught a clue! And the fact that Malcolm's willing to take a risk with his heart...I love Trip's reasoning around the frat regs.

Thanks for a great story. :)

Annie

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luckycricket_1 September 14 2008, 10:12:23 UTC
Thank you! It'll take a while until Trip has fully convinced Malcolm that they can't let the frat regs stop them^^... but he'll succeed, eventually. (*thinks happy endings ;)...* )

Sita

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anonymous September 14 2008, 01:56:35 UTC
Nice, nice story. I just wanted to shake Trip, though, because he didn't have a clue! And Malcolm's tirade after the pond incident was great.

I love how you worked in the shampoo commercial bit. Great inside joke for those of us who know that the actor who plays Malcolm did a couple of them earlier in his career. Loved it!

Kathy Rose

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anonymous September 14 2008, 10:22:52 UTC
Thank you! Yes, the Vidal Sassoon clips... "It's a gel that sprays!" ;)

I'm glad you liked the story!

Sita

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