"A Matter of Trust" by Lady Rainbow

Sep 13, 2008 10:57


Hi everyone! Here's my ENT Ficathon Entry. It's called "A Matter of Trust", suggested by tli. She wanted one involving Hayes, Reed, a stakeout on an alien planet,  with world-building as a bonus. Hope this is OK.

Part I: http://luckycricket-1.livejournal.com/824.html
Part II: http://luckycricket-1.livejournal.com/1144.html

Annie (Lady Rainbow)

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volley2 September 13 2008, 20:16:36 UTC
Brilliant! Captured the two of them perfectly, and the action was great! Loved this story.

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anonymous September 13 2008, 23:04:29 UTC
That was very realistic, not to mention entertaining! I can certainly see these two characters acting this way after their fight in Harbinger. And writing it from Hayes' POV worked very well.

Kathy Rose

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