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[volley2]

Comments

[tli]

Haha, that was so much fun. Loved the detailing of the shuttlepod's upgrades, and Malcolm's own personal touches - of course he wouldn't want any thieves getting too far away in something like a pod! Great ensemble story :)

[volley2]

Thanks! I must admit, the Shuttlepod upgrades were put in as a funny comment by my beta Gabi 2305, and it was too good to leave out!

[anonymous]

Oh, your story was a lot of fun! Somehow I didn't think taking Hoshi and Travis along would prevent the trouble that always seems to follow Trip and Malcolm, and you didn't disappoint me there. It was a nice follow-up to the Shuttlepod One episode.

Felons? LOL. How appropriate!

Kathy Rose

[volley2]

Hehe, we can't let those two go on a mission an NOT get into trouble! No matter the circumstances!

[anonymous]

The anti-robbery device set to English is a stroke of genius! This is a fantastic story. As usual, TPTB left us fans to sort out some of the repercussions of misadventures, and this is a nice look at "Shuttlepod One" aftermath. And you've even given Travis an important part! Extra kudos for that.
This is also full of great little moments, like Archer thinking about worry lines from Trip and Malcolm and T'Pol's 'equestrian accident' comment.
Fabulous- thank you!
~JadziaKathryn

[volley2]

Thank you JK, I am glad it came up to your expectations. :-)

[explodedpen]

Oh this was lovely! Malcolm's little anti-theft device was brilliant and the brazenly honest crooks were funny too :D Great story!

[luckycricket_1]

Felons? Hee-hee! ;)

Interesting upgrades to SP1...the anti-theft device had me laughing. And I grinned when Archer suggested using both English AND Vulcan. (Just in case. :) But Malcolm REALLY needs a way to deactivate it, though.) And good interaction with Hoshi and Travis.

A crystal ball and a toilet...how about a lucky horseshoe and other luck charms hung all around SP1? A stash of chocolate? :)

Great story!
Annie (Lady Rainbow)