'Sleepless' By Exploded Pen, for Roadstergal

Sep 14, 2008 23:09

Title: Sleepless

Author: explodedpen

Written for: Roadstergal

Archive: I'll post it to Warp 5 myself, anyone else ask before they archive :)

Word Count: 1179

A/N: First off, thanks to tli for the various beta reading and reassurances at 1am. This story was really difficult to write as the prompt I chose involved characters I don't usually write a lot of ( Read more... )

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anonymous September 15 2008, 08:17:10 UTC
Loved this. Phlox does look out for the crew in many different ways, and he always seems to keep a special eye on Hoshi.

Oh, and do Trip and Mal ever sleep^^?

Thanks for sharing!

Sita

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explodedpen September 15 2008, 19:13:25 UTC
lol I doubt Trip and Mal slept for days after being put into that coma, just to make sure everything was fine and running in perfect order.

Thanks for the comment :)

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anonymous September 15 2008, 11:44:21 UTC
Nice piece about Hoshi as well as her concern for another member of the crew -- Phlox. A very easy read.

But I'm left wondering, at the end, was she remembering being put to sleep by Phlox, or was it part of a dream she was having while under? Not that I have to know for sure, because sometimes it's a nice twist not to know.

Kathy Rose

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explodedpen September 15 2008, 19:14:16 UTC
The end...well, that ones gonna be left up to you :) Thanks for the comment :D

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