Loved it! It wasn't exactly what I had envisioned when I mentioned 'conflict', but I don't care one bit, because this is just the type of story I like best: with all the characters well in character, a bit of drama and a lot of humour, and... to have Malcolm locked in Archer's quarters, while one of his security protocols has the ship hostage! What a great idea! I like the way you built up the situation, going from one part of the ship to the next, from one POV to another. And of course your and EP's OC are just great (can't remember whose are which, but I like them all!). I also like your descriptions very much, not only of the scenes but of the people's actions: I can picture them very well in my mind. Thank you for a fantastic read, TLI!
Yay, I am so relieved you liked it! I toyed around with so many ideas to begin with (and some with actual conflict), and this was the only one I felt had any chance of being finished by the deadline. It's been a pleasure writing for you, and thanks so much for the feedback! :)
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