"The whirlwind lifts you up to the ceiling, the balconies pass but you don't even see them..."

[entropicalia]

A remarkably short piece I just finished about the moments leading up to execution.

Something of an experiment in, uh...not being so fucking wordy.

Comments

[eriss]

I like this one alot.

[entropicalia]

I thought you would, since you usually admonish me for the extensive use of SAT words. ;P

[kittenofwrath]

Gah...deeply unsettling and creepy. I like it...done in a very unique way.

[entropicalia]

Thank you. I started it two days ago, then thought it was shit. Then I liked it again. Heh.

[thinkpink55]

I like the less words.

[entropicalia]

Thanks. It was at once very difficult and, somehow, very liberating.

[bentrazor]

I dig this. I think about death way too often for this not to resonate. Loves its!

[entropicalia]

Thankya, luff. YOUR TURN!

[zorachus]

Very well done.

[entropicalia]

Thanks very much. :)